Hapuna Beach

Monday, May 2, 2022

A Year in Haiku



Regular journaling or other kinds of record keeping have never motivated me much, let alone inspired any sort of commitment long term. Yet I've always felt a gnawing sense that I should engage with such an activity more whole-heartedly and for a more generous expanse of time than I have previously given myself. Sometime in late January of 2021, I read about ways to begin the journal habit, one of which was by writing in haiku--as in one haiku per day. And I thought I might could manage that. After all, I always rather enjoyed the challenge of collapsing thought, observation, or experience into seventeen syllables. Why not a haiku journal then?

So in February of 2021, I commenced my haiku journal. Definitely some of the haiku are more successful than others for a variety of reasons--content, word choice, structure,...my mood. Here, though, I will only post some of the ones better under the influence of serendipity. 

I shall include, as well, broad category labels to help focus how the content connects to various subjects that I actually carried all the way through to the written word. Some also have a title to help establish focus and/or I needed more syllables than the haiku format allowed.

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MORNING RUNS

Foot splash and leaf-held
drops buffet the hushed running-
in-rain melody     02/21/2021

Running has become
movement meditation to
still the world's noise     04/27/2021

After the rain, I
run wet roads shiny slick with
silver reflections     06/23/2021



ENVIRONMENT and NATURE

Aquamarine--a
turquoise sea slides into the
boundless cobalt deep     02/24/2021

Hard rain can't dance; its
constant collapse across my
metal roof resounds     02/28/2021

Sunlight, like feathers
dancing on a melody,
roused me from slumber     03/19/2021

On a night, the cool
of tropical winter turned
to summer swelter     03/25/2021

With their flaming sting,
fire ants tattoo my body
with itchy red welts     06/15/2021

Among the lions
and baboons, nature plays out
with pain and pleasure     10/26/2021

A house gecko no
longer serves my view of fine
tropical living     01/30/2022



PERSONAL and INTERIOR MONOLOGUE

Now and then I want
your arms, or your words, to hold
me away from this     02/25/2021

Master of rewrites
in life, in love, and always
in expectations     03/20/2021

MAIKA*
With you, Hawaiian
is a prayer, shaving cream
is "whip", and we laugh     04/01/2021

Dark chocolate can
salvage my perspective and
soothe my stressed spirit     04/07/2021

When one cuddles with
a quilt on the couch and cries
over NCIS     04/14/2021

DAVONA**
A lei--ti leaf and
white orchid--to celebrate
a life and passage     05/09/2021

Karen shares last days
with Davona, and I recall
decades of moments    05/11/2021

What I would do or
want you to do does not play
according to script     05/25/2021

To be "the other"--
one haole in the mass--
grants me perspective     05/30/2021

I like to hope I
am a strong woman; maybe
I am just scary     06/20/2021

"Bijou"--a word I
learn for Scrabble...until I
remember there's you     07/01/2021

If, while traveling,
I die overseas, leave my
exiting abroad     08/09/2021

FLIGHT ATTENDANT'S
INSTRUCTIONS FOR AN EMERGENCY 
She ends, "Should I be
incapacitated,
please take me with you."     10/27/2021

A prayer...or a
curse--the energy of thought
and words on the world     11/07/2021

Thus I whispered my
thoughts in shimmers, hoping to
illuminate love     11/14/2021

A baby python
my great nephew names Rosy
Rootbeer Mannion     12/14/2021

NELSON, DESMOND, and ANTOINETTE
A catch in my throat
still rises when I think on
your stories, your words     12/30/2021

THE BIBLE
We eavesdrop on a 
text written for another
time and circumstance     01/15/2022

MLK quoted
with hope or in vain and we
should read all his words    01/17/2022

MIKE COSOLA
Birthdays like yours
dwell in memory and haunt all
my thoughts of what if     01/24/2022



POLITICS and CURRENT EVENTS

That former guy showed
democracy droops under
the lust for power     03/02/2021

We conceal our greed
and selfishness in worthy
words: "self-reliance"    03/06/2021

Decisions made, born
from our fears and greed and pride,
create this world now     03/07/2021

How we love, in spite
of anything and all else,
determines the end     03/17/2021

When treasured people
choose disparate voices and
journeys not my own     05/02/2021

One hundred and one
damnations--still too few for
all the counted lies     06/02/2021

What creates fear in
our minds and hearts and why are
we scared differently?     06/09/2021

The contortions we
employ to rationalize
and offset choices     08/16/2021



BODY and PHYSICAL WELL-BEING

Eating six slices--
crisp, crunchy--reminds me why
I can't buy bacon     03/12/2021

My back aches today
so no other body part
can function with grace    03/15/2021

VICKY***
With her dancer's grace,
she leads me to understand
my body's power     03/27/2021

Diminished somewhat
with accumulating years, my
body dances still     04/10/2021

Years elapse between
my eating of hotdogs and
I burp my regrets     06/03/2021

Pilates pushes 
me to relearn my body--
what's lost, what's wondrous    06/05/2021

My right hip speaks of
age and weariness of use
and I know my years     01/20/22

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*Maika: a student in a Pre-K classroom in which I occasionally sub
**Davona: my mother-in-law
***Vicky: my Pilates teacher

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By the end of a year of journaling in haiku with only three days missed, I realized that I actually wanted to continue with the daily written word in some fashion. So now I am writing a poem---very loosely speaking, mind you--for each day. How this endeavor continues to unfold remains a mystery!

2 comments:

Amy R said...

I relished these. I have been a regular journalist for many years, but at times it feels stale. You have inspired me with new ideas for journaling. Thanks for posting.

Diane Hatch said...

You were meant to be a poet.